Review Detail of BaeVida in Prime Vampire

Nice storyline. Story is developing well. World background is thoughtfully explained. Updating stability is good. Now the review proper, you've got a nice plot line, but the details are a bit too much at the beginning, you can get your reader lost and confused. Grammatical errors are there but author already said that before hand which is nice of you to warn. Try and use grammarly, it would help cos some readers get thrown off with grammar problem as it destroys the flow of reading. Well if readers keep on, ignoring d aforementioned, they would have a good read. Nice work, keep I up author. Added to library for later read