Prime Vampire

Honestly MC kyle reminds of Noblesse with his looks n powers you described Author also the Novels pretty good so far even tho i skipped from chapter 2 to volume 3 really no point in those first 2 volumes wasnt even missing out on anything that was told in the latest chaps MORE HAREM MORE H-Scenes AUTHOR ;))

Reveal spoiler

imma be honest with you, the story is good, absolute f*cking good. the grammars and sentences are something that can be fixed. so yeah... keep writing this and i believe eventually you'll be able to improve your english for the better.

Hi guys,if you are looking for the ' lordy ' stories this is one of the best I have seen.its quite good in plot development and the character designing.. actually I really loved the way you thought about the plot and the synopsis hooked me up in your story..keep up the good work💚

Woow! Sure your writing is awesome, am a writer too but couldn't be that thoughtful, how you describe the whole concept is great, You're really a great writer....

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

It's a very good novel. just keep going mate. (BTW does this novel have a character illustration?) *****************************************

Honestly I wish I had read it before, I put it off because I didn't like the idea of 2 volumes without the MC, but right now I'm completely lost, his backstory is just a big blank and you'd know basically nothing about him without the synopsis. Thanks to the synopsis I am able to piece some things together, but for the rest I have no clue. Like he disappeared for 2k years, that is fine, but from the writing I can't tell if these women are also over 2k years old. It seems like these people are young by the words, but it is also written that they were with him before he left, so ultimately I have no clue about the women. I can understand the male side characters as he has said before that these are just children to him so, but that is where the confusion comes from, if they are young then so too should be the women. There is more to it but ultimately it is all too confusing, I don't like the idea of 2 volumes without the MC, but quite honestly it seems important to the story and based on what I know from where I've read too it is probably better to read that so the story makes sense. Though from what I know it was about the academy before he showed up so there is the potential that some of the stuff I want explained won't be explained a s honestly I don't care about what the academy was like before, all I care about is the background of the women and the MC because I have almost 0 understanding of how they reached this point. Other than that it seems good.

Great novel i love it 👍👍

Great book. The beginning is a little slow but once you get through and meet the main character the story becomes awesome. Keep up the good work and good luck.

Really interesting novel for me with nice POVs and SCs are Cool. Author needs to do something in power balance expect from that everything is good for a newbie. But author took 2 volume for introduction that's ridiculous but acceptable. Nice novel with interesting world background. I will give you 6 stars for that. Your novel is great and keep it up.

Hey thanks for reviewing my book Lumia: Other world. There were few mistakes and it can be corrected if you use Grammarly keyboard. Over all I liked the prolouge and plans to read your book till the latest chapter. it was a bit confusing at first then I saw that it was all the information that I was reading. Your book captivated me being a reader. Wish you luck in future updates. You have my support!

nice story👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Interesting plot, I love it! The characters are profoundly described. The writing in this book is creative and well thought, it makes me have an easy time to imagine all the scenarios taking place. Nice work👍👍👍

Author, This story is very well executed, from the choice of words to the flow of the story. Your writing style is great! which made your story even more fantastic, and, I also love the character's names because it conveys your ideas through their magnificent names. Loved the story so much because I enjoy fantasy stories and wonderful ideas. Well, that's all I can say. Thanks for letting me read such a marvelous story!

It lovely, i found it interesting but the chapters are too short. And please update, waiting for it. Can also check my books out. WHO COULD BE BLAMED? and others

A really entertaining story with interesting world building. Another look at the tense and phrasing of some sentences would do it some good but overall a decent read.

At the start, the story was described in an amazing way, you fell like it's an ancient story. The world was also described amazingly, although the writing could use some polishing and correcting but the novel is all good. My favorite chapter is when the incarnations have been introduced one by one, I already love the characters. 5/5, read it

Nice storyline. Story is developing well. World background is thoughtfully explained. Updating stability is good. Now the review proper, you've got a nice plot line, but the details are a bit too much at the beginning, you can get your reader lost and confused. Grammatical errors are there but author already said that before hand which is nice of you to warn. Try and use grammarly, it would help cos some readers get thrown off with grammar problem as it destroys the flow of reading. Well if readers keep on, ignoring d aforementioned, they would have a good read. Nice work, keep I up author. Added to library for later read

A wonderfully crafted world. Grammar could use some work. Some linking verbs missing, capitalization lacking consistency, among other things. Prose also suffers from the grammar problem, but other than that, would flow well once the grammar improves. Dialogue is natural and as I've said, the world leaves little to the imagination. Would recommend for fans of the genre. Keep on writing 👍