Item: Eshaal: Trusting the Unseen
Rating: 5
Author: zd4zaa

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2021-03-28 17:21

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Eshaal: Trusting the Unseen

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Hello, Author here *bow This is my first time writing a novel, something I've been wanting to do for a long time but did not enough courage to do so. Thus, I'm giving my 5 stars to my own story and courage to finally make one ^^; The story is about two people who have never even met, are separated by distance, but strives to be with each other. This story will be full of up and downs as they try to recognize their own feelings, building their trust to the other, and finding out how to make their relationship works. Some things need to be solved by constantly facing the emotional and physical challenges and find out the best way to overcome it. Some things might be solved easily by money, but even that is not something they have. Basically just as how normal humans are. English is not my first language so I apologize beforehand if there are any grammatical errors, typos, etc. As first-timer, any feedback and comments are very welcome. Hopefully you can enjoy the story to the end ^^ Thank you very much! *bow

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