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2020-03-25 10:32

Hello, Author here *bow This is my first time writing a novel, something I've been wanting to do for a long time but did not enough courage to do so. Thus, I'm giving my 5 stars to my own story and courage to finally make one ^^; The story is about two people who have never even met, are separated by distance, but strives to be with each other. This story will be full of up and downs as they try to recognize their own feelings, building their trust to the other, and finding out how to make their relationship works. Some things need to be solved by constantly facing the emotional and physical challenges and find out the best way to overcome it. Some things might be solved easily by money, but even that is not something they have. Basically just as how normal humans are. English is not my first language so I apologize beforehand if there are any grammatical errors, typos, etc. As first-timer, any feedback and comments are very welcome. Hopefully you can enjoy the story to the end ^^ Thank you very much! *bow

Eshaal: Trusting the Unseen

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Pretty good for someone new I am really interested in seeing how this story turns out and improves. Hope you don't stop working on the novel!! Good luck(**: for I'll give good rating on things that can't be determined this early like update stability)

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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Kera Wood. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy Or reach me at geekyteddyyo@gmail.com

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