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2020-03-27 02:55

It’s pretty original then all the other dragon ball fics my main question would be why be birthed in U13 when you could have been born in U 7 now wouldn’t that be an interesting thing even as a supreme Kai you could have more ideas and chapters since it’s canon and all but in U13 you’ll have to build everything from scratch. At least in U7 with your skills and power you would be able to argue with beerus and not be afraid of him. But anyhow let’s see where this goes good luck

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Don't worry about U7, I definitely have plans for attaching our protagonist to the canon! Also, I am writing this out of enjoyments, and always thought: "I really want to make an original universe in DBZ." I'll be making EVERYTHING in U13 from scratch, all while keeping the canon important!

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Alright and good luck with that hopefully it turns out good. By the way any idea when your going to update?

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I update daily at very sporadic times, since I just write when I feel like it. Should I stock up and create a consistent schedule?

Ashborn2271:Alright and good luck with that hopefully it turns out good. By the way any idea when your going to update?
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It’s your choice whatever makes you feel comfortable

Re_start:I update daily at very sporadic times, since I just write when I feel like it. Should I stock up and create a consistent schedule?
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