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Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv105yr
2020-03-26 11:21

it's a original as far as I can tell I've never seen someone get reborn as a supreme Kai and make his own universe in the dragon Ball world I'm super excited for more I love universe building FanFictions Please don't drop!!!

Universe: Kai

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2 Chs

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Re_startAuthor

With all the support I'm getting, I don't think I'll be allowed to drop it! Ty for the review!

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Re_startAuthor

Shameless 5 star review! This will be a long ride so why don't you give it a read? This is going to be a very, very unique Dragon Ball fanfiction!

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King_Roku
King_RokuLv2

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS !AWESOME SAUSE! thanks for the story! YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS !AWESOME SAUSE! thanks for the story!

5yr
Ashborn2271
Ashborn2271Lv5

It’s pretty original then all the other dragon ball fics my main question would be why be birthed in U13 when you could have been born in U 7 now wouldn’t that be an interesting thing even as a supreme Kai you could have more ideas and chapters since it’s canon and all but in U13 you’ll have to build everything from scratch. At least in U7 with your skills and power you would be able to argue with beerus and not be afraid of him. But anyhow let’s see where this goes good luck

5yr
OOPS
OOPSLv2

OMG I love it! Please keep writing! This concept is very unique to the dragon ball fan fiction genre! I can't wait to see how it develops, and please no harem!

5yr
AyyyZelos
AyyyZelosLv12

Unique take on dragon ball, can't wait to see how sumata will create evil races and righteous ones and focus on the conflict between them, would be pretty cool if later on down the line you focus of the pov's of some mortal races to have a better understanding on how their society works.

5yr
Idle_Daoist_
Idle_Daoist_Lv4

This is a new story with great potential- and reviewing the first few chapters, the grammar is good, the character seems okay for the most part and the story or rather plot is promising. A great story- and I would hope it is not turned into something like a harem- Ciao

5yr
Lostboi
LostboiLv2

A bit quick paced so far, but the concept and writing quality are amazing and it as a lot of potential! Please dont drop this fanfic I cant wait to see how things turn out!!!

5yr
aSleepyPenguin
aSleepyPenguinLv5

Interesting! This has a lot of potential. Can add all the animes into his universe is he wants. Another good thing is, it doesn't even have to be anime, it can be anything.

5yr
AlterarLaRealidad
AlterarLaRealidadLv2

Perfecto me encanta sigue con el buen trabajo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... ... . . . . . . . . .

5yr
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