Review Detail of darkjoker in Master of the Apocalypse

I hoped that you would be here :D nice job man, its the type of story I like, there may be some mistakes but in general, the writing is good,the story development may seem common to other people but I think it has great potential. the hidden agenda of 001 OS is keeping me on my toes and I like it! XD the only problem I have is that you didn't really say much about weapons and the technological advancements of humanity, it can't be just HUD and space travel. all in all the book deserves to be known by more people, keep up the good work.