Review Detail of Thangam_Robert in One Step At A Time (DanMachi)

hello author, i truly like your novel and its very special. i like to tell you that i am not good with speaking and often write stupid things. But this novel of yours is truly wonderful. A very rare factor in fan fic reality and logical factor. it is blend in very well with fantasy and it hits every mark. mc has a love hate personality and i like it. Story development is fine, good. Character introduction is good. has the shadow of a real novel, not fan fic. Still a long way before reaching Grand master level but way above of low or average due to some quirks/specialit in your writing. Let me tell you i am one of those waste fan fic reader that never stick long till end. And from my experience i can sniff out some shitty smell and that what drew me in. Then the reality crash in making me feel frustration anger dislike, but i swallow down and completed and i feel a sense of achievement. And from my perspective i see no future in the story, i could only see a different story , from the second arc. I feel the transition will not be smooth and story will surely change. from reality tragic to romance fantasy. As danmachi has no large plot, new oc, new background, new logic and story fail. As this is a trial story, i feel the quality will not be the same. And it seem like a one shot end on character introduction and romance. Well let's leave my rant , i hope you don't blew a fuse or what ever but instead prove me wrong . one think i notice reading the story it lacked flow, which some good story has, the felling of reading and not knowing when it ended. which can be from bad transition or phasing . Second the story is a mess, i like mess but not a proper way for a story. like when i see the title and cover, i think it's harem girl conquering, when start reading you just hit the reader with a hard slam making there interest lost as well as capturing there intress, don't know iits your charm or talent or what you were aiming. third it good and not suitable for hormonal reader and danmachi is such story of fantasy, so good and bad choice. i don't know how to judge but love it hate it and understand it , so do your best don't mind my rambling