Review Detail of Hemy in One Step At A Time (DanMachi)

this is my opinion of this novel. I get what you're trying to do here I really appreciate it but it's fiction for a reason. fanfiction to boot. why add the negativity and realism bullshit. we already have all that in real life and more. if you're looking to do that make an original sappy shit not take an existing fantasy world and make it about your shitty life representation.