Review Detail of Kreo08 in One Step At A Time (DanMachi)

An overall good story, this is the first story since a lot of time that focus itself on a normal guy, not those badass unrealistic mc that are always unbending and unforgiving even when they are roadside pebbles, let's focus on the rated aspects: -the grammar can be better, don't misunderstand, it's good and clear but there are the always present typos and rare disordered line (RARE) 4 -as of stability so far is good let's hope that the cult of badass cliche op mc doesn't crush author's hopes -maybe it's a bit soon to judge the story development, I' ve yet to discern big differences from the canon (there are some interesting differences though) , but it's a slow paced story in its early chapters, understable, 5 -character design is good and I want encourage the ideas about the mc, it's not everyday that you see a character that is not a god mastermind of schemes in this type of novel, a welcomed change of pace, with also a good character development, also the other characters are well written (but author always strive for better remember 😉👍) 5 -for world building I thought of rating it 4 as I always do for every fanfic, after all in ff no one invented any good world, just took it from the original, but then I thought about cigarettes (why? Read the story), the people around the mc and main characters as a whole are quite alive, with thoughts about matters regarding mc or other non specified interactions (see the chapter about Soma Familia, where 2 side characters talked about thigs of other members etc.) It feels rather alive so I'll put a good 5 It's a good novel to read (if you aren't the boring wishwashy reader that only wants tough MCs, I really question your tastes)