Review Detail of ValerieVoyse in WAR-Destiny of Future

It seems a very action-packed story. Some advise I might give you (regarding for example some grammar mistakes) is once you finish writing the book, put it aside for a bit and then edit it, however don't worry about it too much on your first or second draft. Good effort and keep in mind that the more you write and read, the more you grow as a writer. Keep writing! ❤️