Review Detail of Eiffel_Olympus in WAR-Destiny of Future

The story is really good it was fun to read, i really like the characters and the you build the world and im really amaze on your dedication to write this story. My suggestion is to fixed some structure on your sentences since some parts is quite hard to understand (it took me 2 times to read to understand) but it can be fixed and improve. The story is really good and worth to read and wait,