Review Detail of MaxwellKHA in WAR-Destiny of Future

Item: WAR-Destiny of Future
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

MaxwellKHALv44yrMaxwellKHA

Ok, what a remarkable effort to write around a hundred chapter in such short amount of time. The story cluster actually fine, but I think it can be made to be better with a proper punctuation. This is actually a comedy story, I agree with that person. Author, I hope you're continuing this work, have a nice day.

WAR-Destiny of Future

AI380

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MaxwellKHALv4MaxwellKHA

But I advice you to split the first chapter into several part before someone come here and implied that your story is a big cluster **** although it isn't.

4yr

AI380AuthorAI380

Actually, this is what I spend years writing, including 5 years of writer's block without writing anything for the whole 5 years. I will surely continue writing because this had become a part of my life. Thanks for the review. I will continue to improve my work from time to time.

4yr