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2020-04-20 17:27

I like your writing style and only have one small thing to say. Maybe you should break your paragraphs like split the conversations into separate sentences . It would be easy to read if you could do that. Other than that, this is really good.

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That's a good suggestion, I will improve that when I'm free.

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