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blabeng
blabengAuthor4yrblabeng

Hello I'm the author of this book, I want to try if writing a novel was possible for me and please have mercy on me, I was new to doing this so there was many wrong grammars and spellings. But I'm hoping that you'll enjoy reading my book and be understanding..

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accidentally transferred to another world

blabeng

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gamabunda4873
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None of your chapters have titles Too new for tags Too new for reviews No description Author review is just covering yourselve which makes us feel the novel won't go anywhere or at least makes it feel like we are wastefully spending are time on drivel Plain title that doesn't have any actual connection to the book or at least only tells us their opening unless you've been trying to say (normal) (slice of life) (new world/my own made up world) (someone from different worlds) [DO YOU EVEN WANT ANYBODY TO READ THIS??????] I mean i have read total garbage before where nothing makes sense to anyone but the auther and new names show up like they've been there since the beginning and they dropped it by the 4 chapter but ..................it told me directions or goals

blabeng
blabengAuthorblabeng

Thanks for giving my book your precious time and telling me my shortcomings. I'll do what you said next time. But not now, I want to focused on finishing the whole story first. Thanks for your understanding and concern

gamabunda4873:None of your chapters have titles Too new for tags Too new for reviews No description Author review is just covering yourselve which makes us feel the novel won't go anywhere or at least makes it feel like we are wastefully spending are time on drivel Plain title that doesn't have any actual connection to the book or at least only tells us their opening unless you've been trying to say (normal) (slice of life) (new world/my own made up world) (someone from different worlds) [DO YOU EVEN WANT ANYBODY TO READ THIS??????] I mean i have read total garbage before where nothing makes sense to anyone but the auther and new names show up like they've been there since the beginning and they dropped it by the 4 chapter but ..................it told me directions or goals