webnovel
Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv134yr
2020-07-31 04:12

First, I have to say that I am very regretful that I used a lot of effort and time searching for this novel's raws. I was too impatient to wait for the translation and ended up throwing myself into a fire pit. Second, I will start my review with a bit of good news. I like the world background of the novel. I honestly feel that it is wasted on this particular novel. Third, the ML and some other male characters are serial rapists. They frequently rape their female counterparts even when said females expressly shout that they don't want to have sex with them. It doesn't matter that the females like said males and enjoy the sex, it is a given that the sex is mostly not consensual. The ML is especially terrible and he tends to blame the FL whenever they have sex. He says that she seduces him or provokes him in one way or another although it's not true from the reader's point of view. He is also very callous and often causes emotional distress to the FL. Overall, he is an abusive scumbag despite his occasional display of acceptable human behavior. Fourth, it is quite frustrating that the ML and FL don't ever talk. The ML suppresses the FL and in the end, she gives up on finding answers. An honest conversation would clear up a lot of things that would allow their relationship to progress. However, she dares not speak up because the ML would somehow turn things around and end up abusing her whether emotionally or sexually. As such, neither is secure about the relationship and the FL is especially distraught since she holds a very ambiguous position in the ML's life. Fifth, the children especially Shanshan are too mature. The kids are cute but some of the things they say or do make you feel disbelief and even sad because children shouldn't be that mature. Long story short, I hope that webnovel doesn't pick this book up. I initially thought that they wouldn't pick it up because it is 'good' but now I am worried that they will pick it up because it has all the usual bad things- a scum ML who rapes the FL, an FL who is a doormat, etc.

Liked by 6 people

LIKE
Replies1
Shaiza_Apple
Shaiza_AppleLv3

thank you for u remind ~~~

Other Reviews
Desi_Moore
Desi_MooreLv2
Yashu_Tulasi
Yashu_TulasiLv3
Related Stories

After Marrying Him, the Ending Has Changed

The well-off little salted fish transmigrated to a poor era, where her grandparents valued boys over girls, leading to a miserable life for their granddaughters. Fortunately, her dad, though lazy, slippery, and illogical, shamelessly relying on his parents and taking advantage of his siblings, was protective of his daughters. Her drama queen mother, who was lazy but liked to eat, often tried to coax food off of her, yet she always left a portion for her. There was also the Scholar Tyrant System that pressured her every day to strive for progress, capable of using high-tech to hunt and allowing her to eat meat!! It wasn't until her cousin from her second uncle's family changed drastically after nearly drowning that Jiang Mianmian realized she was in a reborn female protagonist novel of that era, and her family of three was destined to meet a tragic end as reprehensible relatives. However, Jiang Mianmian, who knew the plot well, was fully capable of avoiding the tragic deaths of her parents and was not afraid of the seemingly strong but actually hollow protagonist. Her only worry was the powerful ally backing the protagonist. Then she discovered that the protagonist’s powerful ally was none other than the beautiful young man her father had rescued from the icy river last month! So Jiang Mianmian was completely reassured. With this life-saving favor, the young man would definitely not side with the protagonist against her family in the future. Moreover, Dashan took the initiative and said, "Little Lamb, I’d like to court you with the intent of getting a marriage license, is that okay?" As someone obsessed with good looks, Jiang Mianmian struggled and then reluctantly refused, β€œNo, I plan to have a son-in-law who will marry into the family.” The powerful ally didn’t hesitate, β€œThen I’ll be the son-in-law who marries into the family, and the children will take the Jiang surname!” Jiang Mianmian: β€œLet’s go, get the marriage license!” (Updated and posted at 10:10 AM on the 16th of this month)

Bookworm under the Moonlight Β· Urban
5.0
292 Chs

Madam’s Identities Shocks the Entire City Again

Qiao Nian lived in the Qiao family’s house for 18 years before her biological parents found her. Suddenly, all the wealthy families in the city knew that the Qiao family had a fake daughter! A true daughter of an affluent family would be talented, gentle, and kind. A fake daughter would not be able to pick up any skills and accomplish nothing. Everyone wanted to see how miserable she would become when she went back to her ravine after being kicked out of a rich family! Qiao Nian also thought that her biological parents were poor teachers from Luohe County. Who knew that her brother drove a Phaeton that was worth three hundred thousand yuan! Her biological father was also a professor who taught at Tsinghua University! The big boss of the family of scums became a bootlicker and bowed in front of her grandpa… Qiao Nian was dumbfounded. Erm… this wasn’t the same as saying yes! After being freed from the family of scums, Qiao Nian was able to be herself. She was the top student in the college entrance examination, a live broadcast star and the heir of an invaluable cultural heritage… Her identities were revealed and when she started to appear on the hot searches in the city, the family of scums turned green. The anti-fans mocked: What’s the point of trying to fake an image? Aren’t you just sticking to my brother everyday? Qiao Nian responded: I’m sorry but I already have a match. Top Brother: @Qiao Nian. Let me introduce her to everyone. This is my sister. Wealthy Grandpa: My dear granddaughter, why are you working so hard? If you want a bicycle, grandpa will buy it for you! The rich and powerful in Beijing spread a rumor that Master Wang was hiding a wife in his luxurious house. No matter how much people tried to persuade him, he never took her out to meet anyone. If he were asked, he would say the same sentence. β€œMy wife is from the countryside and she is shy.” That was until one day when someone saw the noble and cold Master Wang holding a girl’s slender waist while hiding in a corner of a wall and muttering with red eyes. β€œBaby, when will you give me a title?” [Fake daughter who is from a truly wealthy family] + [Two big bosses]

Brother Ling Β· Urban
4.5
3636 Chs

Oops, Mommy Slept With A Tyrant

As the overweight daughter of the Sutton family, Kelsie is an eyesore to everyone. Her father can't wait to get rid of her, his wife and their daughter daughter too. The man she's supposed to marry can't stand her and looks for ways to end their engagement, all to no avail. But on the day she's to get married, she finds out she's pregnant. Her fiancΓ© finally uses the opportunity to break off his engagement to her and her father sends her packing to her aunt in another city never to return after she refuses to remove the baby like he asked her to. Seven years later, she returns to the city to claim her position as the heiress of her mother's fortune, which her father and his wife and daughter has been living off of all these years. But not as the overweight duckling everyone expected, but as a stunning, glamorous woman. Behind her are three children: a daughter who looks exactly like her, a handsome son, and another handsome son who looks too much like the most powerful man in the city. Unexpectedly, the dimwit, her fiancΓ© who broke off their engagement comes begging for them to get married like they were supposed to. "So what if you're stunning now and lost all that weight? Everyone knows you used to be an ugly duckling. Who knows the underhanded ways you resorted to to lose weight. Forget our past and marry me again." The woman looked at him and snickered. "Aren't you the heir of the Baker family? Why would you marry a fatso like me?" The man huffed and said arrogantly. "Hmph! Do whatever you want. But I assure you that no one in Silicon Valley will want to marry a woman saddled with bastard children!" The triplets came up on his face and snorted in disdain. "Who's this? Where is daddy when a man like this harasses mommy?” β€œI told you he wasn’t worth her. Hurry up and call him quickly.” The man who was in the middle of a conference call ended it as soon as he heard the news and went straight to where she was. β€œAre you hitting on my wife? Bastards? Are you calling the beloved children of Jett Adler bastards?” β€œEh-what? Jett Adler? The most powerful man in the city? How is that even possible!”

LittleGoddess_ Β· Urban
4.2
203 Chs

The Commander's Useless Wife Is Actually a Hidden Boss!

Lin Fu's biggest regret was being born into a military police family, yet due to physical limitations, she could only sing and dance in the cultural troupe, serving as a qualified vase. Accidentally traversing to the interstellar era three thousand years later, she was thrilled to discover she possessed a rare S-level psychic power, inherently cut out to be a fleet commander. She would attend the military academy, join the Marine College, command a cosmic fleet, and become a gallant female general. ** However, her new identity was just the daughter of a remote star system's farm owner. To achieve her dream, she aimed to marry into the family of the empire's youngest space fleet commander. Commander His Excellency was cold and abstinent, with an imposing presence, yet devastatingly handsome enough to break hearts. Lin Fu fell for him at first sight. She wanted to have him, and even more, she wanted to stash him away secretly. ** Later on, the whole interstellar space finally learned that the always ridiculed incompetent bumpkin was actually the commander of the Empire's Third Fleet. She was also the former most noble and adorable Princess Freya of the royal family, as well as the fearsome star thief that made people tremble. The entire interstellar was boiling with excitement. The handsome and noble commander His Excellency was not happy: What happened to the promise of stashing me away privately?

GlanceView Β· Urban
Not enough ratings
110 Chs