Item: POKEMON: SHADOW VEILS
Rating: 1
Author: Prometheus2000

Prometheus2000Lv45yr

2020-04-02 17:25

This story is just wired first of all Pokemons Use clothes, (at least that's what I understood when he said his dad always bought riolu clothes)then the MC doesn't need to go to the orphanage but he does for some reason (looker told him he could stay home) he also makes annoying friends and if u want riolu to to u don't need a translation device because u can make him talk telepathically with ora Sorry bro, I just got I little trigger because his parents die yet he still acts like a little *****

POKEMON: SHADOW VEILS

NotUse

4.3

217 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies7

Coolblitz33Lv2

Yeah, Kalem can stay at home but who will take care of him since his parents are dead or in the cavern thingy? That's why he went to the orphan.

5yr

_Goodies_Lv3

Dude common sense. Have you seen a ten-year-old kid living alone in their house with a pet? That's why there's a word called "Orphanage" which purpose is to take care of kids who lost their parents. Just think of it. Who will pay all the bills at home?

4yr

Prometheus2000Lv4

Dude you and the author have to realize that this is NOT OUR WORLD IT IS THE FUCKING POKEMON WORLD, where this **** is not "common sense" since by the age ten they already have dangerous creatures (not pets, creatures and they are fucking dangerous) and travel entire regions by themselves so again don't tell me this **** is common sense because again dude this is not our world and sure in our world a ten year old child would not be able to take care of himself/herself because of common sense right, and that is something that you might lack since you reply to a comment on a pokemon story fully aware that our common sense doesn't apply to the pokemon world. So next time you might want to use some of that "common sense" that you seem to know a lot about

_Goodies_:Dude common sense. Have you seen a ten-year-old kid living alone in their house with a pet? That's why there's a word called "Orphanage" which purpose is to take care of kids who lost their parents. Just think of it. Who will pay all the bills at home?

4yr

Prometheus2000Lv4

4yr

Om_Patel_4281Lv13

You need to calm the f**k down. If you don’t like it,don’t say sh*t.

Prometheus2000:Dude you and the author have to realize that this is NOT OUR WORLD IT IS THE FUCKING POKEMON WORLD, where this **** is not "common sense" since by the age ten they already have dangerous creatures (not pets, creatures and they are fucking dangerous) and travel entire regions by themselves so again don't tell me this **** is common sense because again dude this is not our world and sure in our world a ten year old child would not be able to take care of himself/herself because of common sense right, and that is something that you might lack since you reply to a comment on a pokemon story fully aware that our common sense doesn't apply to the pokemon world. So next time you might want to use some of that "common sense" that you seem to know a lot about

4yr

Prometheus2000Lv4

Your kind funny since you are answering to a comment that you don't like but according to your comment people shouldn't say **** they they don't like something right so it seems that your comment doesn't make any sense because you don't even follow your rules. So next time why don't you calm the fucking down,and if you don't like it,don't say ****.

Om_Patel_4281:You need to calm the f**k down. If you don’t like it,don’t say sh*t.

4yr

Prometheus2000Lv4

Om_Patel_4281:You need to calm the f**k down. If you don’t like it,don’t say sh*t.

4yr

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The final title of the book will be called "Pokemon Shadow Veils" and not "Pokemon Judgement" anymore. Thank you for those who read my book, more chapters are coming😉

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FUN AND NICE BOOK ABOUT POKEMON!!! WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! THE CHARACTER NAMES IN THE STORY IS WELL MADE AND WELL THOUGHT! CONTINUE THE GOODWORK

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Diost42423Lv5

Nice story ........................................................................👍👍👍 Want more update .............................👍👍👍

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Great story Zed! ^^ so far the story smooth though.I like the characters how they interact to each other how the pokemon and their owner care gor each other tho.Lastly I thought myself that kinda like to draw some of characters tho🤔 hehehehehe

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Don't mind me, just getting some EXP. .................................................................................................................

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