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I find the name calling childish. The whole story is ok i guess but mc still act childishly too. Sometimes he have tantrum and just kill everyone that annoys him. I guess this kind of novel might appeal to other people but not me. V

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I like your way of writing and i find it really good. Grammar mistakes have i not really seen when i have read your story. For the Stability of Updates here can i not see much after 2 chapters so only 3 stars. 3 Stars too, it is to new for a better rating and i can't say much for the time beeing. The Charakter are really good writen and i think it is absolutly logical that they have a hate for humans ad will kill easy. The world Background is not so good to the time beeing. Only a copy from DXD but the more you introduce the new World then i will give you more stars^^ Flaws in my sight. 1. A supernova destroys a "Universe" really!!! You can say our Universe has more the 1 Billion galaxys and every Galaxy has more the 1 Billion suns and now aonly 1 Supernova can destroy a Universe "grins". A supernova is a normal thing and it happens now and later. When our Sun becomes a Supernova in ca. 5 Billion years the it only affect our Sunsystem^^ When you will destroy a Universe you must use a Power on the same Powerscale how all Infinity Stones from the Marvel Universe or the Anihilarke from Ben 10^^ 2: For this the Ancient One is not the Guardian of the Universe he/she is only a Guardian of Earth not more. I

The book is boring and not stable time skips in every chapter and basicly every one is dumb even the OP Mc😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

The only reason this novel has so many stars is because of regular updates. Just read the first few chapters. In my opinion, this story is below average in terms of writing quality and story. I have seen too many Novels like this and I doubt the author will rewrite his chapters. But, I have to give props to the author for his regular updates. He is dedicated I give him that.

I really don't like the character bella she only does ****ty things while luci just stands there like nothing is happening and the comes the idea of two MC's even though it says two bella is the main point of the story. Honestly this story doesn't hold a candle to the other story dxd lucifer.

Haven't read the book, but read reviews as I tend to do before reading a banger. When ever someone criticizes you just say 'Yea whatever boomer' you need to take the criticism and work on it and try to help you and your writing style; Use it to your advantage and dont make it a weakness . P.S most bangers normaly have better reviews that 2.5 stars most ok ones have 3 or 4 stars from a few people. So a 1 star juat from the authors reaction.

Words cannot describe how disappointed I am with this story, so much wasted potential 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

The story isn’t very well done. The characters aren’t showing any significant developments. The dialogues are very short and could be extended. The plot is partly ridiculous. For example NYC is nuked at one point in time without even trying to resolve the situation any other way.