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PonsLv64yr
2020-03-23 01:58

Story was good until they learn nothing for less like they see human as ant then that ant blew the sun up and KILL everybody but the mc but they still learn nothing and still see human as ant.They are threaten by shild but they only kill like 100 and let the ducking members alive so they can gather again to blow them up.his girl got hurt but he did what KILL the flowers not the man who ordered it.Rlshe can read mind nan fam I anit gonna use it and see everything important just the ducking useless stuff only.

Marvel: Aspect of Domination [COMPLETED]

TNT_Subho99
4.0
80 Chs

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TNT_Subho99
TNT_Subho99Author

If you don't like it just go somewhere else or write yourself. I don't care any long of what haters think

4yr
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CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

I mean his grammar is bad compared to mine and mine is complete **** but his revue did give me some warnings and looking at how he is op from the start makes me frustrated as I’m in the mood for a growing and training to be op mc sadly

TNT_Subho99:If you don't like it just go somewhere else or write yourself. I don't care any long of what haters think
4yr
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DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Bro, I couldn't read 2 sentences in a row without wondering wtf u were trying to type...

4yr
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newthings
newthingsLv6

i think hes trying to say that "mc when his girl got hurt he only killed the followers not who ordered them" this is all i understood XD

4yr
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Alfha_Robby
Alfha_RobbyLv6

Basically he's said that despite MC literally strong enough to destroy a sun & literally kill everyone else, his enemy still thinking that mc is as weak as an Ant. Also despite having ability to figure out the real mastermind who order enemy to kill / kidnap mc's heroine by using mind rape, mc only kill the subordinate, not the mastermind behind the scene. P.S. After I found out that this story is written by the same author of Sparda Gulgamesh Lucifer i just suddenly lose interest with the novel since the author didn't intend to hear reader's criticism, though I applaud & respect him for simply not deleting these 3 stars & below review unlike other author.

DaoOfCulture:Bro, I couldn't read 2 sentences in a row without wondering wtf u were trying to type...
4yr
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JockerMans
JockerMansLv3

hello a query the harem of the protagonist will be giant with many marvel women or what are you doing xD I hope there are many milfs like may parker

TNT_Subho99:If you don't like it just go somewhere else or write yourself. I don't care any long of what haters think
4yr
1
FrangKenStain
FrangKenStainLv3

what is nephalem?

TNT_Subho99:If you don't like it just go somewhere else or write yourself. I don't care any long of what haters think
3yr
1
omegawerewolf1
omegawerewolf1Lv3

And that’s how I know there’s no bus going to be bad because you are completely denying his opinion you’re just saying he’s a hater and not taking into account what he is saying meaning that you are a bad author

TNT_Subho99:If you don't like it just go somewhere else or write yourself. I don't care any long of what haters think
3yr
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Ahathatha
AhathathaLv1

3yr
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Miyama_kaito
Miyama_kaitoLv3

Thnx for the heads up, nice for the translation btw, I didn't quite catch what's he trying to say.. XD

Alfha_Robby:Basically he's said that despite MC literally strong enough to destroy a sun & literally kill everyone else, his enemy still thinking that mc is as weak as an Ant. Also despite having ability to figure out the real mastermind who order enemy to kill / kidnap mc's heroine by using mind rape, mc only kill the subordinate, not the mastermind behind the scene. P.S. After I found out that this story is written by the same author of Sparda Gulgamesh Lucifer i just suddenly lose interest with the novel since the author didn't intend to hear reader's criticism, though I applaud & respect him for simply not deleting these 3 stars & below review unlike other author.
3yr
1
sean_8817
sean_8817Lv13

I am only on chapter 9 and I already can't continue this. I like the start of the story and I want to keep going I really do, but the way the characters react and think just doesn't sit well with me. I get icky just reading it. I want to know how this ends so I reaaallly reeeealllly want to try and finish this. so maybe I will just read this slowly. I don't really make a habit of commenting bad things about works like this because I respect the authors for being able to do what I can't.

2yr
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RandomPasserby96
RandomPasserby96Lv14

I find the name calling childish. The whole story is ok i guess but mc still act childishly too. Sometimes he have tantrum and just kill everyone that annoys him. I guess this kind of novel might appeal to other people but not me. V

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I like your way of writing and i find it really good. Grammar mistakes have i not really seen when i have read your story. For the Stability of Updates here can i not see much after 2 chapters so only 3 stars. 3 Stars too, it is to new for a better rating and i can't say much for the time beeing. The Charakter are really good writen and i think it is absolutly logical that they have a hate for humans ad will kill easy. The world Background is not so good to the time beeing. Only a copy from DXD but the more you introduce the new World then i will give you more stars^^ Flaws in my sight. 1. A supernova destroys a "Universe" really!!! You can say our Universe has more the 1 Billion galaxys and every Galaxy has more the 1 Billion suns and now aonly 1 Supernova can destroy a Universe "grins". A supernova is a normal thing and it happens now and later. When our Sun becomes a Supernova in ca. 5 Billion years the it only affect our Sunsystem^^ When you will destroy a Universe you must use a Power on the same Powerscale how all Infinity Stones from the Marvel Universe or the Anihilarke from Ben 10^^ 2: For this the Ancient One is not the Guardian of the Universe he/she is only a Guardian of Earth not more. I

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Aakash_khare
Aakash_khareLv4

The book is boring and not stable time skips in every chapter and basicly every one is dumb even the OP Mc😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰😰

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Manfred_Manson
Manfred_MansonLv5

The only reason this novel has so many stars is because of regular updates. Just read the first few chapters. In my opinion, this story is below average in terms of writing quality and story. I have seen too many Novels like this and I doubt the author will rewrite his chapters. But, I have to give props to the author for his regular updates. He is dedicated I give him that.

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Fweeee_eeeeLv10

I really don't like the character bella she only does ****ty things while luci just stands there like nothing is happening and the comes the idea of two MC's even though it says two bella is the main point of the story. Honestly this story doesn't hold a candle to the other story dxd lucifer.

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Aisumnetes
AisumnetesLv2

Haven't read the book, but read reviews as I tend to do before reading a banger. When ever someone criticizes you just say 'Yea whatever boomer' you need to take the criticism and work on it and try to help you and your writing style; Use it to your advantage and dont make it a weakness . P.S most bangers normaly have better reviews that 2.5 stars most ok ones have 3 or 4 stars from a few people. So a 1 star juat from the authors reaction.

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OkayVelvet
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Words cannot describe how disappointed I am with this story, so much wasted potential 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

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tyr12345
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The story isn’t very well done. The characters aren’t showing any significant developments. The dialogues are very short and could be extended. The plot is partly ridiculous. For example NYC is nuked at one point in time without even trying to resolve the situation any other way.

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