I would have given this fanfic a full 5 but You just had to add the descendants of the kochou sisters, its like adding clones of the original imo. should’ve just added the original ones but this is where i drop goodbye -TDOBS
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LIKEAnd this is just a personal knd of review, I don't get it why are you so offend in such dumb reason? Just because your waifu wasn't f*ck by the mc and basically your like this? I've seen many unreasonable people and your at least at the top 10. Clone? so what does being her granddaughter makes she lost quality? If you think so think your a one huge assh*le.
TheDaoOfBullshit:If you want me to list the problems of your novel then fine: -In the latest chap its like his eq dropped by a margin -grammar and sentences -some of the characters doesn’t act like them