This is a thoroughly interesting and engaging story. The world of twilight has never been more interesting to me. The MC is overpowered, but isnt a total ass, or somekind of unrealistic character. Hes a powerful werewolf and a spartan warrior and is honest, kind and respectable to those who treat him the same, but woe to those he calls his enemies or those who threaten his family. I i usually hate when Fanfics try to forcibly change things in the story without thinking them through, but this managed to do it in the best way possible all while progressing perfectly as a story. The original story Of twilight is changed, but it never feels forced or ridiculous, it flows naturally. The characters from both Twilght and Danmachi are done jusitice and the story only seems to be getting all the more interesting with the new power system. The plot did seem slightly off at times, but it always came around. The comedy is on point and the grammar issues are nonexistent, or atleast unnoticable. The sex scene came out of nowhere and felt out of place and werid at first, but was not something unwanted, nor unapreciated. The fact we never really find out what happens to Irina bothered me for abit though. All in all a truly engaging and wonderful read. I truly recomend it. And to the author- Thank you for writing this story.
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