Review Detail of Chainslock in dust to dust ashes to ashes this is dropped sigh

So far, so good. Stories of rebirth are not my usual cup of tea, but anyways it’s a good one. Concept is well-presented. Characters are dynamic as well. However, I do see a bit of rough transitions and grammatical errors (e.g. punctuations). I suggest the author to edit because one may find them a bit distracting. Overall, great job. Keep up the good work.