Review Detail of The_Mad_Titan in The Tylingariea Epic

The author does a great job with world-building and follows it up with decently written characters and a good storyline. But, I feel the first few chapters should be looked at again, cause that invites your reader, it was a bit confusing for me at first because of the grammatical errors and inadequate spacing but got better as i continued. In summary the author did a good job with this