Review Detail of Blank_thought in The Tylingariea Epic

The story has great potential, the plot is good and very intriguing, I like it. I also want to say that I really admire your naming style, very unique and memorable. However, the story is not that easy to read, I had to repeat some parts 3 times to fully understand the meaning of it, and you don't want your reader to misunderstand what you are trying to say. I believe that you should start editing the story and you really should focus on grammar mistakes. but overall it's great ^^