Review Detail of The_Cheshire_Cat in The Tylingariea Epic

When I started to read it, it felt little overwhelming with some of the lines being quite a long and you tried to make sense what was happening as the first five chapters felt like they went from one to hundred really quickly but when you slowly for used to it it was a little bit easier to read. But yeah, the first chapters left me somewhat confused about what was happening that I had to backtrack slightly and pick up the important parts. Then it made sense again, so I would suggest to split some of the larges lines into two and place focus on the dots, spacing, and commas to make it somewhat easier to read. Otherwise, the world background was interesting, and it could be improved still, but I'm at chapter ten still, so I don't know how it looks at the later chapters. But the character development was good, and the focusing on feelings, etc. was well written and really good, so it's obviously one of the strong points of this story.