Item: Isekai For My Ex
Rating: 4.4
Author: Jin_Daoran

Jin_DaoranLv105yr

2020-03-28 16:37

Good enough grammar. But please give some effort to making sure the paragraphs and conversations are formatted to be readable too. The novel description said the MC was a normal human with no power and got by with wits and determination. I was hopeful that this MC would not be another overpowered idiot. But then the MC was announced as the fiance of a queen in the third chapter which... is something else, haha... And then he defeats half a dozen knights effortlessly with a dual-wielding style he has never used before, analyzed the difference between wood and aluminum with a single glance from the bleachers of the fighting arena, and then later plans and executes a rescue operation without prior experrience, based apparently just on knowledge gleaned from TV and family stories, then goes on to defeat...well, you get the idea. Author...*cries*...your definition of 'powerless' is apparently very different from mine. I'm partial to isekai where the MC's power is just modern knowledge, but give some logical reason how the MC got that knowledge please. If any person can plan a hostage retrieval just from watching TV and listening to grandpa talk about the war years, then this reviewer hopes to learn the violin from watching lindsey sterling on youtube. The plot progression of this novel is great. There is always something to be interested in as the MC introduces the wonders of bombs to a medieval world based on magic. The growing relationships of the MC have some interest as well, though I think giving the MC actual friends rather than people he steamrolls over at the soonest opportunity would heighten interest in the world. The beginning chapters are a bit rough but the format and grammar gets better as the story progresses. Lots of action, good development. All in all, a good read. Good going author!

Isekai For My Ex

firiewww

4.6

118 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies2

firiewwwAuthor

Thank you for the honest review fellow author, exactly the reason I'm reviewing them again, your input will help me improve and the story as well!

5yr

Jin_DaoranLv10

You're welcome! Happy to be able to help.

firiewww:Thank you for the honest review fellow author, exactly the reason I'm reviewing them again, your input will help me improve and the story as well!

5yr

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Personally I really liked the character development not only of the MC but also of the secondary characters, it's rare to see that in Isekai and that's what made me abandon the genre a while ago. Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me 👍 Like what has been said in other reviews, I think the biggest flaw of this novel is the spelling errors, I advise the author to correct them, at least in Chapter 1, since a lot of new readers will not go any further.

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If you like those stories where the main character goes on adventures in a parallel medieval-like world, then you've come to the right place. What also makes this story unique is that Andrei, the novel's protagonist isn't summoned as some kind of powerful hero. Instead, he tried to figure out his way all by himself. The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers. Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!

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If u like a transmigration novel for a light and fun read, I will definitely recommend it for you. For the Author. You need to work hard and improve that's how it's. First of all if you are writing in third person. It will be better to use past tenses. And regarding the concept. It's preety good. You have an idea. Now it depends on you, how you can develop it. As a fellow author, I only wish u best of luck

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So, by reading the synopses, I noticed that you are passing exactly through the same problem as I did when I started. You are not using full stops at all! I would recommend to buy grammarly or try google docs (I preffer grammarly, though.). Anyway, keep the good work. Gonna give a 5 stars since I can identify myself in your grammar. ;)

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