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Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Butcher's Graffiti

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Masterfully executed, this one. Your prose wonderfully paints the scene with descriptive vocabulary. Dialogue is organic and realistic, adding more to the already solid world. Grammar is the only thing I saw that could use a touch up and even then it's nothing another read through can't fix. Pretty good book. Keep on writing 👍

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Thanks for the review!!! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ