Review Detail of zako4 in I BECAME A GAME'S VILLAIN

Enjoyable story however, it could be better. Lots of ideas for tower climbs hopefully there's uniqueness in this story. The story pre 20 chapters lack the aspect of showing rather than telling. A lot of summaries and info at times. Dialogue can help improve the flow. Somewhat improved after chapter 20. Readability is good. Pacing is fine. Not a fan of the inventory, it didn't align with the sovereign of water. Felt like gates of babylyon from Fate or just a MC buff honestly. MC is a pretty cliche reincarnated gamer pro of the game with nearly perfect knowledge of the game. Though, reality had some differences which was good. Still he's nothing noteworthy.