Dang I have become addicted to this book. I read for so long that I’ve gotten caught up all the way! I really enjoy the way you made Ryan/Viper pup because he is being a leader and teaching everyone what he knows! I l love how each character has their own personality and aren’t always nice because that would make too boring.

This is definitely one of my favourites that I'll be following for as long as I can. I love the story so far. It does have a few mistakes still but what doesn't? 9/10 would recommend. ((Just wish the updates were more stable that's why its 9/10))

I love the way that thIs book capture your interest. I love the characters in the book, they all have a story behind and a development that we are able to follow. i also love that he becoming a wolf in a pack and not just some OP rough wolf.

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Writing quality - It's alright, not too many mistakes and it's readable. Stability of updates - Pretty meh, no real schedule. Story Development - Too centered around main character, he's the center of this world and nothing happens unless he's there. And we still don't know anything about his past life besides he was a (can't think of the right word) wolf scientist/docummentary person who was betrayed by someone that wasn't expanded upon at all. Character Design - Most characters are pretty two-dimensional and the main character is a huge Gary Stu, he acts like (SPOILER) a super genius detective on the latest few chapters out of absolutely nowhere for example. World Background - There's not much to say. We don't really know anything about it and what we DO know was explained in a few blocks of text (swamp clan, tempest clan, blood clan, etc for the wolf clans and their territories). Overall, it's an alright need but needs lots of polishing and maybe a rewrite when author improves a bit. Nonetheless, you should give it a try before making your own opinion.

I dont normally write review because I'm lazy lol I like it, it's unique and different it is really something worth reading even though the author is just a beginner and i hope you get better in writing.

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The story is kinda like another series I know, but, like, who cares about that. The writing style is ok-ish, but the story is good. In all, it is a good book.

So far it’s a good story it has very good detailed events and also describes each character very well so it’s really easy to imagine each character and what the doing