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Review Detail of Rooz in Artificial Immortal

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Rooz
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Pretty good! Although I can't say that I'm blown away, the writing is solid. I'm reading books for the plot, and so far it has been very logical and nothing really seems out of place. Could use a bit more worldbuilding, but otherwise I'm getting exactly what I expected from the books description.

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Artificial Immortal

Ekdud

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Ekdud
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Thanks for the suggestion, worldbuilding is still to come. I wanted, and probably will, slowly build the entire world as the MC learns of it. Instead of giving it a clear description with a information bomb. The MC is still naive in the beginning and his active range is still limited to the communities around him. Like a baby bird still in its nest, it only knows of the world around the nest and maybe the tree. Once he grows enough to take flight, a vast world full of adventure and excitement awaits him.