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AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv134yr
2020-06-27 05:03

I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying: -first they just tried to kill him and steal his game. ->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason. -then they followed him and invited themselves at his home. ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality). ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -he tries to work but gets interrupted again ->but still forgave them for no valid reason Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week. In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch. It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests. Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.

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ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

Oh No, he's one of ~Those~ MC's, isn't he? "What, you stepped on my shoes? I'll kill all 18 generations of your family! Oh, wait, you're an annoying and bossy 12 year old girl? Well then I guess you can just break all my things, spend all my money, insult my mother and spit in my face and I'll just stand there like a Beta Cuckboi because I'm a """"Nice Guy"""" who can't "Be Bothered" to stand up for himself. UGH 🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️

AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv13

that's the mc's personnality in a nutshell, yes...

ThrustThunder:Oh No, he's one of ~Those~ MC's, isn't he? "What, you stepped on my shoes? I'll kill all 18 generations of your family! Oh, wait, you're an annoying and bossy 12 year old girl? Well then I guess you can just break all my things, spend all my money, insult my mother and spit in my face and I'll just stand there like a Beta Cuckboi because I'm a """"Nice Guy"""" who can't "Be Bothered" to stand up for himself. UGH 🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

thanks for the warning

Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2

Yh tbh I hated that like wtf at least stand up for self tbh I would of told them **** off. When A MC is too forgiving it’s just annoying And I hate girls in novel who fall in love with a the mc with out even knowing him for just because he’s good looking or is strong or what ever.

phrogberry
phrogberryLv3

then I think you have to read more than 5 chapters cuz mc isn't how you portrayed him to be. at least imo

AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv13

well it's how he behaved, that's exactly what happened, and if that isn't how he continues to behave starting from the 5th chapter then it's even worse cuz that means mr author isn't able to stick to how he portrayed his character

phrogberry:then I think you have to read more than 5 chapters cuz mc isn't how you portrayed him to be. at least imo
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