Idea of story? 5/5 Legit it was an actually banger of a change of PoV base off of close Canon. Small changes here and there, not much of a biggie in my opinion. Writing and development overall was great up to Volume 2. Even some small hints of new characters off to the side. Either allies and/or enemies. Nice spin to it, but Volume 3... I have to say sadly that I did not know what was going on. Base on what I read so far... side missions (filler stuff???), the 2 year skip canon, Gaara Arc (???), and some side arc (I assume movie related stuff). It felt... "all over the place" if you know what I mean. Not being to harsh because comparing that volume to the previous 2... he had a good run overall. BUT of course there was a comment left by the Author with one of the comments. "Personal stuff happening" and so it can't be help. I won't fault the Author due to trying to continue his story. Things happen and it is understandable. It is quite sad to see this go, but I will say this was a nice refreshing read. V1 up to V2 4.3/5 for personal rating. I liked it quite much. Sad to see this go, but there could always be a continuator in the future or a similar adapt of idea which of course there are plenty out there. This one takes my cake cuz... it is Akimichi Choji HAHAHA. I really did quite like the character in this novel's presentation of it. Yes some thing could be a little bit better, but those little "matters" are small. It was fun to read in the end. Hope you are doing fine Author! Stay healthy 😉
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