Review Detail of Sharelvandor in The Verlusian Conspiracy

Although I'm not really familiar with mecha-themed plotlines, I can still say that the Author had put a lot of effort in building his world background as well as in incorporating jargons pertaining to mechanized equipments and weapons. Kudos to that! I also think that the Author has a stable grasp of good writing. The descriptions and sentence structures are well-written with minimal grammatical errors. Good job! Keep up the good work.