Translation quality = good stability = n/a Story development = weird so many different tones that just dont flow at all, some of it feels forced. Plot twists come out of left field and make you question the earlier parts of the story. Character design = The Mc is very strange one minute he's a cute money grubber, the next he's angsting about murdering someone when he was a kid and burying them in the garden. The invigilator from the supernatural organisation is the grand daughter of the man who drove the Mc's family to poverty (although this is only brought up once and feels false from later chapters), she also doesn't give him the reward money for hunting down a known criminal for no reason. Apparently they were childhood friends but from what I can tell she's some sort of weird sadist that likes seeing the Mc in distress, this is probably the author trying to inject personality into a potential FL by showing her thoughts. What it has succeeded in doing is pissing me off and making me drop the story before the pay wall. World background = potentially very expansive and interesting if the author wasn't attempting really hard to be vague and seems to hate the idea of info dumping, so dont expect to know anything thats going on. The Mc goes to hell and annoys the person there whose role isn't given only hinted at (he is some sort of corpse artist who has bought the Mc's corpse, in hell no further information given) who gets annoyed by the Mc's chatter and instead of gagging him throws him out of hell somehow. The Mc comes back to life amidst the supernatural investigators and they all think "yeah this makes sense you can go now, I'm sure the experience of death and fighting supernatural creatures is normal for a high school student. Go back to your everyday life now please". The main characters cheat is inconsistant and annoying, and his personality is flippy floppy with a chance of angst or sillyness in any situation. overall = 2.8 not good
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Well the story isn't that bad. It might seem a little confusing but it gets really good. Some parts are a bit too vague but o feel that they will reveal it later. It just helps add to the mystery. The money grubber personality is more like a mask he wears for society. Also the death trials he keeps on having will have an affect on his personality. He did experience all that death trials and **** after all. So he is kinda developing a second personality
Well the story isn't that bad. It might seem a little confusing but it gets really good. Some parts are a bit too vague but o feel that they will reveal it later. It just helps add to the mystery. The money grubber personality is more like a mask he wears for society. Also the death trials he keeps on having will have an affect on his personality. He did experience all that death trials and **** after all. So he is kinda developing a second personality
I think you have a misunderstanding. Plot twists are supposed to be unannounced. It’s not a twist if it’s not something unexpected.
The girl gave the money back to the mc. She was just waiting for the right time. The Mc's personality seems more original here cause of mixture of different emotions he shows. There's no romance and chances are kinda low too(upto 100chap that i've read). There seems little nationalism(watch out Americans😁). And if you can get past info dumps then its really a good story.
