Daoist_sword_edge
Thinking is a crutch for the unable minded
of reading
2012
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Daoist_sword_edge5 months agoCommentedJust in case you forgot this was translated.
- Daoist_sword_edge5 months agoCommented
No wild animal fearing for it's life is going to react like this.
This book has been deleted. - Daoist_sword_edge5 months agoCommented
Huh?
- Daoist_sword_edge10 months agoCommented
What a ridiculous statement. Your mc has so many advantages and has so much more skill and experience, yet you measure him against a 6(?) year old child.
- Daoist_sword_edge10 months agoPosted
In this story the charming and charismatic protagonist charms everyone with his charisma. The charisma he gives off is obvious to everyone from a young age due to his charming personality.
- Daoist_sword_edgea year agoReplied to Emmanuel_Capricorn
A person has triumphed over something. A person is triumphant after success.
- Daoist_sword_edgea year agoCommented
He has magic, how is he dehydrated. The trope is so strong it overwhelmed his ability to summon/create water inside his body.
- Daoist_sword_edgea year agoCommented
English rhyme after translation? Very cool.
- Daoist_sword_edgea year agoPosted
Love how this looks, hoping for many chapters and regular updates. .
- Daoist_sword_edgea year agoPosted
There are literal love heart emoticons in the story. I cannot explain how much of a turn-off that is. My recommendation is not to do that. I gave it 3 stars because I couldn't get past the love hearts, and if the story gets better from there, I haven't read it.