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Bodhisattva_Panda
Bodhisattva_PandaLv54yr
2020-05-09 02:35

I'm only 5 chapters in, but I'm already enjoying the concept of the story. so I'm going to leave this review, read it so far I haven't been disappointed, well, besides the tiny mistakes from editing that occasionally occur, everything else is great. ill reply to this review as I read on to show if my opinion stays the same or if it's changed.

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Bodhisattva_Panda
Bodhisattva_PandaLv5

25 chapters in, still enjoying the story, but the problem with the editing. here's an example, 30 turns to 130 and 1 to 10, I can understand missing out a few numbers or adding numbers, the reason I gave you those as an example is that I don't get how four turns to forty, (that's right written with letters).

Bodhisattva_Panda
Bodhisattva_PandaLv5

damn it, I ran out of stones.

LokiMaster
LokiMasterLv14

In the new novel releases there's a Novel Called Plague Doctor, please give it a read so it can get chosen.

Bodhisattva_Panda
Bodhisattva_PandaLv5

gotcha, iv saved it to the library and get around to reading it whenever I have a chance.

LokiMaster:In the new novel releases there's a Novel Called Plague Doctor, please give it a read so it can get chosen.
Zen_Itsu
Zen_ItsuLv2

It’s interesting

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