I'm only 5 chapters in, but I'm already enjoying the concept of the story. so I'm going to leave this review, read it so far I haven't been disappointed, well, besides the tiny mistakes from editing that occasionally occur, everything else is great. ill reply to this review as I read on to show if my opinion stays the same or if it's changed.
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LIKE25 chapters in, still enjoying the story, but the problem with the editing. here's an example, 30 turns to 130 and 1 to 10, I can understand missing out a few numbers or adding numbers, the reason I gave you those as an example is that I don't get how four turns to forty, (that's right written with letters).