Review Detail of Kabuk5 in Douluo Dalu 1: Big Brother Of Ning Rongrong.
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There's always a suspension of belief when reading fanfiction, but letting an untrained 5 year old who was hidden at birth leave the clan to travel alone, specially in a dangerous world like this? Good luck with the story, it is fun if you turn off your brain, but otherwise, you won't be able to enjoy it. Pros From the little I read, the characters were beginning to be fleshed out Grammar and structure is good Cons I said it already, so no need to repeat
Douluo Dalu 1: Big Brother Of Ning Rongrong.
Ishya_Chan
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Kabuk5:You stated in your first chapters that he was born in a remote and secure location because of rival clans..... so how is it not dangerous for him to travel unescorted?
You stated in your first chapters that he was born in a remote and secure location because of rival clans..... so how is it not dangerous for him to travel unescorted?
Ishya_Chan:When did travelling for some village and town became so dangerous? Also the reason he was hidden at first was to not let any complications happened
I think you have miss read it. I didn't mention any rival clans, but the people from the treasure clan only. Also he left the clan with only his family knowing so no one would know where he is even headed, so impossible to track him
Kabuk5:You stated in your first chapters that he was born in a remote and secure location because of rival clans..... so how is it not dangerous for him to travel unescorted?
As for him not training, he did train to control his spirit power for a month under his family, making him able to reinforce his already abnormal body to a high level. I suggest reading more.
Kabuk5:You stated in your first chapters that he was born in a remote and secure location because of rival clans..... so how is it not dangerous for him to travel unescorted?
Ishya_Chan:When did travelling for some village and town became so dangerous? Also the reason he was hidden at first was to not let any complications happened
soooo there wouldn't be any bandit, arrogant young master with a "trained bodyguards" and local expert between town to town? or will the untrained 5yo somehow win against a spirit saint or something by having a massive amount of plot armot or will his adventures from town to town be so tame and calm that a untrained 5 yo can go on a travel without any difficulties?
Ishya_Chan:When did travelling for some village and town became so dangerous? Also the reason he was hidden at first was to not let any complications happened
No, lol. Only someone extremely unlucky will experience that. People just got used seeing Chinese Mc meeting those kind of peoples every time they go have their journey. Luckily, Ning Chen is quite Lucky compared to them.
KING_IN_YELLOW:soooo there wouldn't be any bandit, arrogant young master with a "trained bodyguards" and local expert between town to town? or will the untrained 5yo somehow win against a spirit saint or something by having a massive amount of plot armot or will his adventures from town to town be so tame and calm that a untrained 5 yo can go on a travel without any difficulties?
KING_IN_YELLOW:soooo there wouldn't be any bandit, arrogant young master with a "trained bodyguards" and local expert between town to town? or will the untrained 5yo somehow win against a spirit saint or something by having a massive amount of plot armot or will his adventures from town to town be so tame and calm that a untrained 5 yo can go on a travel without any difficulties?
Ishya_Chan:And yes. His travels are tame and calm, like sightseeing until he arrive at his destination.
Ishya_Chan:When did travelling for some village and town became so dangerous? Also the reason he was hidden at first was to not let any complications happened
Kabuk5:You stated in your first chapters that he was born in a remote and secure location because of rival clans..... so how is it not dangerous for him to travel unescorted?