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IYANUYIMIKA_ESTHER
IYANUYIMIKA_ESTHERLv14yr
2020-10-20 11:25

The story is well detailed, the plot is not twisted in Noway and there is less suspense which make the story more interesting. A shiver ran down my waist when I read the part that Wu Lan died I taught of how the negligence of her father and the cruelty of her step mother led to her death.....I'm glad she got Zen😉, the poor cat....so sad. Overall this is great author __shan, I look forward to more of your stories💋 guess what you made !me love sci-fi fiction... Thanks for that __shan.

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_Sha
4.7
65 Chs

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_Sha
_ShaAuthor

Hi, dear readers, this story is about a girl who was abandoned and neglected. The time gave her an opportunity to kill her enemies but alas she was no more human, she became a self learning robot in result of an experiment. I welcome you for a good read.

5yr

Primate
PrimateLv4

Followed till the latest chapter. Great piece of work. I would like to commend you for this stage of the novel. So far so good. Great MC, great storyline, great use of the grammar, great world building. Great book. Keep it up, fellow author👍

5yr
Chainslock
ChainslockLv4

Definitely a must-read story. The concept is original, and intriguing. Characters are interesting, and have their own sense of individuality. Text is grammar-wise. Overall, great job 👍

5yr
Nazhat
NazhatLv3

I am recommending this story.This is a fabulous story with different texture, chareacter and emotion.Here most of the story in this app telling abut rich heroes and Beautiful heroines but this story is containing different kind of emotions. Here the author create a strong bond between a robot and a girl. Besides it is containing only 65 chapters that means this don't have any unnecessary context. Everyone should read this. It's a kind of master piece. Thanks author. May Allah bless you with all the happiness of havens😊😊.

4yr
Cynk_Napp
Cynk_NappLv5

Reviewed at chapter 4: An intriguing drama of eviction and hope. Belonging and dispatch. I am eager to see where this leads.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

5yr
sahara_sudan
sahara_sudanLv1

Reveal spoiler

5yr
usha412
usha412Lv14

Ah, I read the whole story, and then came to review. The author is pretty talented, and I like this novel. It is pretty intriguing and I would recommend everyone to give it a try.

5yr
JTProductions7
JTProductions7Lv2

I only read up through chapter ten, but what I read was very good. The punctuation is good, the English could use some work though. The writing was interesting and entertaining. Overall, I would say, "Good job, author! Very nice!"

5yr
Ivy_MisTy_Mohan
Ivy_MisTy_MohanLv3

Nice story....................................................................... .. ........................................................

5yr
LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv13

Honest Review Another excellent entry! From a pure story perspective, this one is my favorite. The Good: The characters and atmosphere the author creates are very unique and interesting! The world is slowly fed to us instead of just dumping it all on us at once making it easier to digest. The Bad: My brain started to hurt with so many short one line sentences followed by another short one line sentence. In some of the chapters I would say at least 50% of the sentences begin with the word "She". The Neutral: The writing quality is decent, just the overall structure needs a little work. This will get better with time and feedback.

5yr
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