Item: Moxie Solo
Rating: 4
Author: LordSputnik

LordSputnikLv135yr

2020-03-17 10:59

Honest Review Another excellent entry! From a pure story perspective, this one is my favorite. The Good: The characters and atmosphere the author creates are very unique and interesting! The world is slowly fed to us instead of just dumping it all on us at once making it easier to digest. The Bad: My brain started to hurt with so many short one line sentences followed by another short one line sentence. In some of the chapters I would say at least 50% of the sentences begin with the word "She". The Neutral: The writing quality is decent, just the overall structure needs a little work. This will get better with time and feedback.

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