Review Detail of LordSputnik in Universe Tales: Virtual Log of the Fallen One

Honest Review Solid entry to the WPC, can see why it has a lot of votes! Standard VR tropes, but with enough polish and strong characters to let it stand on its own. The Good: Excellent writing quality! I like how the author has really given it their all to put out so many chapters in a short span without making it feel like they're just puking out words. The Bad: I might just be missing something in here, but I feel like it's a fantasy game world and nothing special. I feel like more thought could've been put into the world itself and the story. I don't feel a sense of purpose yet for the characters. The Neutral: Could use a little more attention to the world itself and an overarching plot of sorts. I imagine this could be revealed with time though unless it's just a standard wuxia "Get stronger than everyone else" sort of thing.