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VRMMO_magnuttLv44yr
2020-03-11 16:10

Well where shoud I start... The writing quality is polished with finess that I find no major issues with the grammer what so ever... The fact that you added Gore and Violence to a VR novel is very appealing easpecially because I've grown sick and tired of reading novels that pixelate monsters when they die. Its a VR novel with a clutz little girl for an MC.... The character development is brimming with potential with how the MC currently is... The world Building is amazing, I have no stupid critics about it... The fact that it has a lot of universe instead of a single giant continent filled with races is also a very great add. All in All 10/10 keep up the Great work Author..

Universe Tales: Virtual Log of the Fallen One

xxAlter
4.8
1 Chs

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tukeassist
tukeassistLv13

ok mään

4yr
xxAlter
xxAlterAuthor

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely do my best to give every one of my readers a great read!

4yr
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SioMino
SioMinoLv15

Good story enjoying Maria so far. Kind of love the air headed moments and along with the fact that she is getting the hang of how things work in the game. Love the no romance OP female lead. Kind of wish I can find more novels/fan-fics with female lead that have no romance. Anyways, the world background is great it just gets better the more chapters come out. Maria, herself, is a great character so far. Also, with the side characters have their own character design that you can see throughout the story. Besides Zack I just don’t like him. Stay away from Maria, hmph. Horny little kid. Haha, I wish there was more chapters so I can read more. Keep up the good work so far. Also, I don’t see why there was like 8 chapters, or however many there was, over Maria getting magic. Was kind of unnecessary.

4yr

Megumin_Explosion
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Colby_Trafton
Colby_TraftonLv3

Reveal spoiler

4yr
zhaderx
zhaderxLv4

As expected of Alter! A cute easygoing book that’s easy to read and a fun ride(so far, it’s alter, twist coming100%). The MC is a airhead and super OP, but in a good way. The side characters have nice and lovable personalities and there is potential character growth~ Which the author is rilly good at! Recommend that you read his other book, it is extremely good~!

4yr
subhi
subhiLv14

This story is funny and good , the mc adventures is funny and entertaining. It has been a long time since i found a good story like this. So thank you author and please continue writing this story.

4yr
kheira
kheiraLv5

Nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good,nice,good.maria is a little bet OP.i think.nice,good.

4yr
CyberElf_Evandle
CyberElf_EvandleLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Rain_0
Rain_0Lv3

Uhm where should I start... First I really love the personality of the characters mostly the mc. I love airheaded funny characters that charges into stuff. The story development is just right for me, it isn't too slow or too fast and lastly the background of the story whatever you call it, it's understandable rather than random names popping outta nowhere wondering who the hell they were. Overall it's a good novel and a must read if you like characters like the shield girl from itai no wa or mmo type novels.

4yr
LifeDestroyer
LifeDestroyerLv12

this is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... . The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective .. VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ..

4yr
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