Review Detail of Sigheti in New Hope Academy

While I believe the story to have potential, I believe the execution could be improved. Until now, I have yet to sympathise with the characters as they appear rather bland and, due to this, I fail to engage with the story. But, as I mentioned, they do have the potential to become great characters. While poor grammar may now and then disrupt the flow of the story, I am aware that this is a fault that can only be improved by practice (I am certainly no stranger to this myself).