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king_sake
king_sakeLv134yr
2020-09-27 01:04

mani I'm honestly just doing this for the xp so don't take my review seriously ight so just don't look past this point why tf are u still reading

Awakening of the Ancient: Rise of the Fallen

Demonic_angel
4.7
197 Chs

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Raven_Aelwood
Raven_AelwoodLv3

Everyone pay your respects! A true king.... A bona-fide Man of Culture 😂

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Me_Personally7
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Hello reader, David here. So, I am a bit new to this site/app and so far, I must say that the experience is great. I was so lucky that I even got a collaboration with OSNOF (an author), to make a novel! There's a high probability that you know where this is going. Yes, this is self-promotion — but wait! I am tremendously sorry for the disturbance, but it is just that we need an audience that gives us motivation, assistance and knowledge in writing amazing stories. The reader and overall audience plays a significant role in the creating of a masterpiece. Without you, how would we be certain as to what works and what fails? OSNOF and I need you! The story we are writing is a first-time thing, this is our first novel here, and it started mildly slow and confusing, but there was a major improvement in the later chapters. Hop into a completely magical new world with our Main character and watch him gradually grow and change. Watch as he struggles and fights his way against figures of utmost monstrosity! Our novel contains the most popular elements seen in Webnovels, including: A system, magic, fantasy, creatures, leveling, monsters, even our own things like elemental crystals, etc. Click on our profile picture and read ‘New World Archeria!’ today! Hopefully I did not disappoint anyone by this message. And Hopefully I did my part as OSNOF’s editor and novel promoter. Thank you, for you precious time. (Reading it is optional, if you are currently reading this novel, and is looking for another novel to read simultaneously, then our novel is highly recommended)

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I didn't even read this novel but I gave 5 star reviews because of my craze for Rise of Demon God. Please don't concentrate on other novels and give your 100% on writing the 1st novel. I am eagerly waiting for your chapters everyday so do try posting atleast 2 chapters a day for Rise of Demon God. Do not stop posting. All the best. Just post continuously we will make your novel best in the ranking with our power stones and best reviews.

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totallyNotGarfield
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I've already read "Rise of the Demon God", and I saw that you wrote more novels. I gave it a shot and it was good! I'd like to say that the description is somewhat confusing. It indeed gave information about the novel, but not the way it should've done. It seems rather forced, and as I said, confusing.

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Manvinder01
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Have to be honest one of the best book I have been reading absolutely a gold mine....love how the charactor are be introduced and love back story of everyone in it so far..... I hope it won't be dropped....

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Wallabalooza
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There are quite a few issues with this story. First and foremost is how absolutely slowly it moves. By chapter 20, the story has barely even begun, and it took about 11 chapters to reach what should have essentially been the first. This feels like a result of you going into extreme detail about backstory and world building before even giving the reader a chance to care about your characters. These are things that should have been introduced gradually, and less forcefully, as the story progressed, not all at once at the beginning. You also have a tendency to over explain things a lot. This not only takes up 200+% more words than you need to, it gets very tiring to read. The grammar is okay, but not great. You use "!!!!" and "???" and chatroom-like syntax, and it makes your story come off as if written by an overly excited teenage girl (which may be the case, I don't know). Your dialogue tends to be heavy eye-roll material as you often use it for exposition, making your characters come off as robotic and unrealistic. Backstory should not be forced into dialogue. It kills a story. And you've done that /a lot/ in yours, and right from the start as well. You've got a few interesting ideas and some potential, but the way you write seriously needs an overhaul. Spend a little time reading better written works, see how they do things and try to reach where you are at Ch20 in 2-4 chapters instead. Good luck.

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AsunaKaoru
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After years of study on literature and novels in general, I have finally had a revelation. Cultivation novels are retard magnets that try to forcefully make the reader feel smarter. I have read so many comments, in cultivation novels specifically, that make me want to bash my head into a wall that I can no longer not say this. Wait a minute What if I'm mistaken? You see, most cultivation novels have a certain tag next to it: Harem. That's it! Harem novels are the true retard magnets! That's why ever fanfic harem novel I've ever read has made me want to puke my guts out! I can see clearly now!

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Good immersive story. Though I wish it would have more chapters. So good so far.............................................................

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