Scenic descriptions... check! Fresh character... check! Plot... check! I really enjoy reading these types of books. Looking forward to reading the next chapters!!! Watch out for word usage since it tends to get less descriptive the more we use more words. It happens to all authors so it needs constant improvement. All in all, you're off to a good start! Just slap a nice cover on your book and you're going places! Keep it up, dear author!
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