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AlienTurkey9958Lv114yr
2020-06-16 19:23

I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last reason is a bit more personal and that's that I really connect with the character because I'm mixed, black and Latino, and have went through some of the things that they have gone through.

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The_GajiAuthor

Thanks for the review AlienTurkey. I really wanted to write a sports story that captured the feelings of what it's like to really be on the team. I read a ton of sports novels and they mostly focused on the mc and how amazing he could get and I felt like they were missing such a huge part of sports which was the team dynamic. I'm glad that you can connect with the characters so well. I tried my best to base everything off of my own experiences as well as the experiences of my friends so that they would come across as authentic. Thanks again for reading and supporting the story :)

MusponLv13

this goes on till he retires right can we see him become a coach

The_Gaji:Thanks for the review AlienTurkey. I really wanted to write a sports story that captured the feelings of what it's like to really be on the team. I read a ton of sports novels and they mostly focused on the mc and how amazing he could get and I felt like they were missing such a huge part of sports which was the team dynamic. I'm glad that you can connect with the characters so well. I tried my best to base everything off of my own experiences as well as the experiences of my friends so that they would come across as authentic. Thanks again for reading and supporting the story :)
The_GajiAuthor

Haha, that sounds like an interesting idea Muspon. I will definitely keep it in consideration :)

Muspon:this goes on till he retires right can we see him become a coach
MusponLv13

maybe a squeal about his career as a coach?

The_Gaji:Haha, that sounds like an interesting idea Muspon. I will definitely keep it in consideration :)
The_GajiAuthor

Or maybe a sequel about his kid following in his father's footsteps? lol both sound interesting and full of potential :)

Muspon:maybe a squeal about his career as a coach?
Daoist959033Lv2

it already sounds good

kun_xuLv1

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RuneSmithLv4

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Robert_SiriLv14

When are you dropping a new chapte r

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