I'm disappointed. I thought this was a story about secrets with a deep magical system, but after 85 chapters, nothing special has happened, except that the author constantly puts a stick in the wheels of the main character. First, by adding a useless female character that created a lot of problems for the main character, then I introduced nanites that should help, but instead only harm by interfering with the effects of really useful potions, I do not know what will happen next but at the moment I can't imagine how else the author can ruin the life of the main character except by crippling him completely and leaving him to die in some roadside ditch arriving in the abyss of despair and suffering Writing Quality: 5/5 Updating Stability: 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 4/5

Pretty good, at times could use a bit more of the "show don't tell" rule like for example at the beginning it states that he's highly intelligent witch comes off pretty bad. It's better usually to explain stuff like that trough actions and achievements rather than to blatantly say it. Other than that, the world is pretty interesting and I'm wondering if he'll end up going back to earth at some point in the story since it seems kinda relevant.

Can't say much about this book, for now. But it is worth a shot. There are a few grammar mistakes, but not enough to make it unpleasant to read.

Great story, I like the character development a lot, its not like the normal storyline its realm intriguing. Haaa but alas it has the problem of slow release

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Oh dear author, chapter 21 of the novel ruined everything for me, your magic system is very simple, just say a word and I pseudo understand some things you can use infinite magic, I wish it was more complex like "Warlock of the Magus" World" " or like "A Sorcerer's Journey" in those novels if you have a high quality magic system

i highly suggest to read this top notch novel. very well written and well thought plots although there are very fewww typo errors. the story is very interesting with many twist and turns + character development is top notch. world development is very rich and interesting. i would also like to add with the mc not being too op. thank you author for sharing 😄 keep it up ✊

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BALANCE IS RESTORED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................................................................