KarmaKalo

I think the one star reviews are needlessly harsh. This is an OP character but in a laid back kind of way. If you're used to overpowered characters who are always starting something then this isn't the story for you. This is more of a character where if someone starts it then the mc will finish it and destroy everything. There is more action and fighting down the line if you read past the initial chapters. I've enjoyed the read so far.

If you're looking for a solid kingdom building naruto fanfic then look no further. This has been an enjoyable story so far and I look forward to further updates. You can tell that the author has put a lot of work into the story.

Great Chapter

This has been a fun read so far and I look forward to future chapters. If you're looking for a gem in the Naruto fanfic space then look no further. Keep up the great work author!!!!!

I've always thought the split movie and powers were pretty cool so to see it in a fanfiction is awesome. The author does a great job of gradually building up both the character and scale of influence. I look forward to more chapters.

What about the bounty on the Jonin? At that level there should be some type of bounty the mc can cash in on.

Why do people read villain tag novels and not expect any villainy? Go back to hero protagonist perspective if you want sunshine and rainbows. The power of friendship is calling you home 🌈

Did you copy the plot from The Last Prayer fanfic? It's not an exact copy paste but the plot seems to be lining up pretty darn close so far...

Thanks for the name drop

The story has been good thus far. ...................................... .................................... .................................... .....................................