Review Detail of Jlairu in Fenrir Rising (Rewriting)

I'm not sure how you think the book is good if you hate the story. Could you please elaborate?

Most of my disagreements have can be said to have answer, bs and half a$sed but still its there. So i can like the story to some degree. However that doesnt change the fact that said story is just like what the F. Fenrir He says something along the lines of "if my siblings wanted my company they are welcome to train with me," so if you know they aren't really wanting of your company to begin with why push yourself so hard for them? But thats me viewing him as a human and having a PERSONAL disagreement with his character, I know wolves have close familial relationships and may even sacrifice themselves. Still because of how humanlike Scol and Luna, this leaves a question. Are their varying degrees of wolflike personalities because of their age or because of their blessing? IF it's the latter then doesn't that loosely disagree with why the goddess turned them? Altough the former has some basis it was never clarified and the latter also had some basis as well, the goddess matter of factly stated about them communicating with humans. On the topic of Goddess.... Seeing as The goddess is aware humans killed their parents and that she wants them to co-exist, stupid or foolish, humans aren't exactly friendly thats like teaching them to put their hesdsads on a guillotine. Also the execution is, well, stupid the Goddess knowingly kept relatively close to a human settlement. Group suicide? Why even bother saving them? The Goddess knows how dangerous the world yet chooses to raise them like pets, giving them a false delusion of security. Why thats inderectly Harming them. She saves them yet everything she has done apart from optional traing has effects them negatively. Sadist? *sigh* You'd expect the wolf children, fenrir in particular who has the common sense to questiom the motives of the goddess,, to be eveb slightly wary or maybe even hostile to humans. Buuut we are presented with essentislly "eh whatever oh you killled my mom the goddes eh whatever, "annd then there's stupid a*s Scol "oh please sir take me." Haven't they all been warned of the dangers? The salvation to the story is that the main character didn't run to save scol but luna. However by this point I reached my breaking point, I was too far gone. Reading further was like stabbing needles in me. My impressions of other characters. Short.If you're wondering... Luna...Fairly stupid but has potential. Scol...A lost cause. Humans unrealistic attitude towards wolves but I guess the story is fictional. BUuut lets be real for a sec if there was an off chance they are nice because of the goddess, would that really uphold after her passing? In which case why so friendly with, as a human would say "mutts." BUT I dont say much abkut it as maybe later in the story they'll add the missing excuse for why they wanted the wolves. If the story takes the horrid route it'll like copulate ane enslave their chlidren, or normal pG stuff to become apart of the pack - wolves familial relations. The slow pacing of the story is another thing. But this has gotten wayy too long.

Most of my disagreements have can be said to have answer, bs and half a$sed but still its there. So i can like the story to some degree. However that doesnt change the fact that said story is just like what the F. Fenrir He says something along the lines of "if my siblings wanted my company they are welcome to train with me," so if you know they aren't really wanting of your company to begin with why push yourself so hard for them? But thats me viewing him as a human and having a PERSONAL disagreement with his character, I know wolves have close familial relationships and may even sacrifice themselves. Still because of how humanlike Scol and Luna, this leaves a question. Are their varying degrees of wolflike personalities because of their age or because of their blessing? IF it's the latter then doesn't that loosely disagree with why the goddess turned them? Altough the former has some basis it was never clarified and the latter also had some basis as well, the goddess matter of factly stated about them communicating with humans. On the topic of Goddess.... Seeing as The goddess is aware humans killed their parents and that she wants them to co-exist, stupid or foolish, humans aren't exactly friendly thats like teaching them to put their hesdsads on a guillotine. Also the execution is, well, stupid the Goddess knowingly kept relatively close to a human settlement. Group suicide? Why even bother saving them? The Goddess knows how dangerous the world yet chooses to raise them like pets, giving them a false delusion of security. Why thats inderectly Harming them. She saves them yet everything she has done apart from optional traing has effects them negatively. Sadist? *sigh* You'd expect the wolf children, fenrir in particular who has the common sense to questiom the motives of the goddess,, to be eveb slightly wary or maybe even hostile to humans. Buuut we are presented with essentislly "eh whatever oh you killled my mom the goddes eh whatever, "annd then there's stupid a*s Scol "oh please sir take me." Haven't they all been warned of the dangers? The salvation to the story is that the main character didn't run to save scol but luna. However by this point I reached my breaking point, I was too far gone. Reading further was like stabbing needles in me. My impressions of other characters. Short.If you're wondering... Luna...Fairly stupid but has potential. Scol...A lost cause. Humans unrealistic attitude towards wolves but I guess the story is fictional. BUuut lets be real for a sec if there was an off chance they are nice because of the goddess, would that really uphold after her passing? In which case why so friendly with, as a human would say "mutts." BUT I dont say much abkut it as maybe later in the story they'll add the missing excuse for why they wanted the wolves. If the story takes the horrid route it'll like copulate ane enslave their chlidren, or normal pG stuff to become apart of the pack - wolves familial relations. The slow pacing of the story is another thing. But this has gotten wayy too long.

As you can see there is alot of depth to the story considering the in each chapter. Which is good but can be overwhelming. CAN ceate confustion due to the absurd amount of information or plotholes. Anyway good work at least your trying, its not all that bad of a story anyway.