It's a great story so far. I can't wait to read more. I'm really curious as to the direction this will go. Keep up the great work. - Great characterization - Grammar is good - Plot is building up slowly (I like it) -- Trying to find one's self in a new place unknown can lead to all sorts of branches of storylines - The battles were great so far - The vastness of space can be felt through your writing ---> Overall, Excellent job.
Kotohood
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