this story is good but world background is bad and small detail are missing at least need to write characters eye color height and some other features and for back ground i understand barely anything it's hard to imagine where does this country exist and how big it is and etc author is just creating country without proper back ground and no explanations it is hard to even understand that county is on rioneed or earth
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